نمونه رایتینگ تسک دو جنرال و آکادمیک

موضوع زیر را بخوانید و همه نکات کلیدی آن را تحلیل کنید. سپس در چهل دقیقه به آن پاسخ دهید.

It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school

?To what extent do you agree or disagree

 یک نمونه پاسخ “بسیار خوب” را همراه با تحلیل و بررسی ممتحن رسمی در زیر آمده است. پاسخ نوشته شده خود را با آن مقایسه کرده و ایراد های خود را بر طرف نمایید.

I most definitely agree with this statement, and I am convinced that if more people would share this statement, many of today’s problems could be avoided and, under the risk of sounding candid,   the world would be a better place

If one is aware of the general, Western (well, global really) civilization tendency towards living within closed groups, almost from “birth to death”, one may find that addressing the subject at the earliest moment possible is a reasonable possibility of starting to fight that tendency. Children are naturally kept, in the first few years of their lives, in a very limited and controlled environment, and then gradually start opening up to the world around them. So it is very important that, when they start doing so, they also begin to understand what surrounds them_ people, races,social backgrounds, family structures, religious beliefs, etc._ as parts of the real world where they will live and be called to change, improve or condition

The alternative to this will be, as it is already today, that children will live more and more isolated from reality in all its varried, and sometimes cruel, features. I believe these children, not having had a chance to directly communicate and interact with other kinds of children, will fear and even resent such differences. Ignorance and misunderstanding is ( has been and will be) one important source of conflict, and social conflict in the first instance

I think I can say I was fortunate enough to have attended an elementary school which was characterized, among other things, for just such a feature: even though it was a private school, where parents who could afford it had to pay a substantial fee, it had a policy of taking in children with all kinds of differences. I got accustomed to having colleagues and friends of lower social backgrounds ( economically speaking), who were state- financed to attend the school; with different learning abilities ( deaf, mentally-disadvantaged, etc.) and of different ethnic backgrounds( Asian and from Portuguese African ex-colonies)

I am very certain that this part of my education helped me better understanding and accepting the world around me still nowadays I have all kinds of friends and like to know things about all kinds of people, and I know not everyone around me does the same

 نمونه پاسخ فوق ( که در اصل فایل پی دی اف کاملاً با حروف بزرگ نوشته شده بود و ما برای راحتی شما آن را تایپ کردیم) از ممتحن رسمی نمرات زیر را گرفته است.

Task Response: 7 Coherence and cohesion: 8 Lexical Resource: 7 Grammatical range and accuracy: 7

Writing band: 7